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| Sean's photo comments. Ok catching a jet at just the right time I have tried to impart the threading of a needle through my hand gesture. Image cropped and framed with contrast added. |
Ok mate nice go at this shot, a little surreal but I get it in the end.
Overall with weighting 7.15 / 10
Martin's score & comments
Sean's entry "Jeteyed"
Martin's entry "A Soothing Hand"
Martin's photo notes
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I really like the approach to this piece, it
reminds me of an editorial picture I
would expect to see in a Time magazine.
The use of govt authoritarian headings
left me feeling the frustration of the locals
with the crumpled paper under the
indigenous hand.
The white juvenile hand over although not
your intent creates a friction in a way I
reckon – in a good way - Innocence /
empathy / inexperience over sorrow.
(white on black) You could Interpret this
in a number of ways.
Well put together – maybe a little more
cropping on the right if anything.
reminds me of an editorial picture I
would expect to see in a Time magazine.
The use of govt authoritarian headings
left me feeling the frustration of the locals
with the crumpled paper under the
indigenous hand.
The white juvenile hand over although not
your intent creates a friction in a way I
reckon – in a good way - Innocence /
empathy / inexperience over sorrow.
(white on black) You could Interpret this
in a number of ways.
Well put together – maybe a little more
cropping on the right if anything.
Overall with weighting 7.18 / 10
Sean's score & comments
| June 2008 Topic: Hands set by Sean |
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